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  <title>Comments on 'Doomed (Holdini's Horror Challenge)'</title>
  <subtitle>The door snapped shut behind me cutting off the hallway light that had lazily illuminated the rusty steps. _Why do they always put the trashcans at then *end* of the alley?_

Insistent rustling in the discarded newspapers made my head snap in the direction of the noise. My eyes attempted to pierce the darkness. A high-pitched squeak. I stood motionless. Silence. _A rat, hopefully_

The last step onto the wet mossy cement was just a shade higher than the others. My shoe slipped before it found purchase. Temporarily out of balance I flailed my arms and connected with the wall, scraping my knuckles. _Shit_

Deliberately I made my way to the cans, careful not to step on rotting peels, _or worse_. *CRUNCH* My dilated pupils imagined a bone peeking out under my shoe, some crimson flesh still attached. _much worse_

After an eternity I reached the glinting metal cans. Hastily I opened the lid, dumped the trash, crashed the lid and turned. Then I saw it, arms outstretched, tiny legs pumping. *The teddy-bear of doom!*</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-07-23T18:05:16Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Doomed (Holdini's Horror Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;love the teddy bear of doom! &lt;br /&gt;i think i have an idea for a sequel&amp;#8230;&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-07-23T18:05:16Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>smarty101</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Doomed (Holdini's Horror Challenge)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Teddy bear of doom. Ha ha, totally awesome! 5 stars just for that.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-10T23:33:28Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>John Perkins</name>
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