Comments on 'Alex in Wonderland - Part 28'"Smooth move, ex-lax," sighed Amanda as she dropped the handful of change Becky handed her into a pocket, "now what?" She took her place in the semi- circle next to Jessica.
Alex and Becky had scrambled during the excitement and were standing near the door, at the head of the sprawled Caterpillar. Alex stuck his head out the door, just enough to look, "We have to make a decision, _now_! They're coming!"
Jessica was breathing hard. She shouldered the door, slamming it against the wall.
"Go, go, _go_!" She yelled, pulling Amanda's arm first, then Becky, and Alex following, not needing the prodding. "Lose the heels," Jessica growled, "You're slowing us down!"
Amanda stepped out of her shoes without question. Becky, raised a brow, "And run in my socks? _I'm so sure!_"
Jessica looked over her shoulder. The man from the mirror store was leading a group toward them, but they weren't running. Then she saw Krystle; looking like she'd stepped right out of an Olivia Newton John video.
"This is totally warped."2008-06-09T21:36:01Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33724Comment on Alex in Wonderland - Part 28<p>So much great material here Jen! I especially loved <em>Then she saw Krystle; looking like she’d stepped right out of an Olivia Newton John video.</em><br />Hope my next post is up to your challenge!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33724?basename=694102008-06-09T21:36:01ZKevMullinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/kevmullinsComment on Alex in Wonderland - Part 28<p>Showing us your age, eh Pyro? =P</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33724?basename=693792008-06-09T20:13:10ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21Comment on Alex in Wonderland - Part 28<p>I used to have a crush on ONJ . Brilliant</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33724?basename=693302008-06-09T18:22:25ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on Alex in Wonderland - Part 28<p>Good to see Tommy Chong back in the fold. And brilliant use of the phrase “smooth move, ex-lax.” Have not heard that in a while.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33724?basename=693122008-06-09T15:52:07ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21