Comments on 'spineless was he'the earthworms came and ate his spine
spineless then and now, the dirty swine2008-06-13T10:38:55Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33741Comment on spineless was he<p>Dunno about all the techincal stuff, but I like the poem. It reads like the head of a tombstone.</p>
<p>..that was meant as a compliment..</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33741?basename=705032008-06-13T10:38:55ZRazorbladeRhapsodyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/rrComment on spineless was he<p>hahahah love it. that dirty swine! :]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33741?basename=697832008-06-10T23:57:34ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on spineless was he<p>You are right. I did break the iambic tetrameter (not pentameter) The second line is nine syllables long and doesn’t start iambic, so I inserted a “the” to make the ending iambic.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33741?basename=695582008-06-10T05:25:13ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on spineless was he<p>i was going to say you broke the iambic pentameter and then my wife and i argued about it and i think that she was right it is can still be interpretted as iambic soo good job</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33741?basename=695562008-06-10T04:56:06ZMighty-Joe Younghttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_8969