Comments on 'Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing'

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-18T21:07:58Z

Wow. Perfect ending. Beginning. Beg-end-ing, like you said. The last words make me shiver.

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-11T05:26:17Z

Kind of a bummer that it’s over, but definitely a superb entry into this competition. I’ve said it before, but it bares (bears?) repeating, you really manhandled this challenge. I figured anyone could put something up, but making it good would be a challenge. You made it look easy, and kept us all very entertained the whole time.

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-10T23:33:50Z

@Kev – Yessir…this is it. Finito.

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-10T18:49:17Z

Ah, excellent “beginning” to the story arc, so by the title, I’m assuming this is also the “ending”?

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-10T02:32:01Z

Ah, ok. That makes sense.

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-10T01:27:27Z

@John – The continuity shift was intentional. I wanted June’s financial desparation to push them toward the robbery and have misgivings later.

@JLaughter – Thanks…it was a lot of fun and a departure for me.

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-10T00:58:38Z

Very cool stuff, Ben. Very well put together, very Out of Order, all in all an excellent read!

Comment on Out-of-Order Challenge - The Beg-end-ing

2008-06-09T21:52:02Z

I think it should be “Pack were winning.” Also, is there a continuity error having June be the one who pipes up saying ok?

Other than that, excellent little series. Definitely a spectacular entry into the challenge. It was an exciting read. I thoroughly enjoyed it.