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  <title>Comments on 'The Way I wanted things to be: Part 5'</title>
  <subtitle>Susan turned away from her mirror.
&amp;quot;How do I look?&amp;quot; she asked. I peered up at her. 
&amp;quot;Here,&amp;quot; I said. I got up from my spot and went over to her dresser.
&amp;quot;I think this color fits you perfectly!&amp;quot; I picked up a stick of lipstick and smothered it all over her face. She yelped and jumped back. Then, I went back to reality. Came out of my thought and peered up at her. 
&amp;quot;You look pretty,&amp;quot; I said. She smiled and looked down at her blue dress. She spun around and it flowed along. 
&amp;quot;Thanks. Now, you better go. Ryan will be here soon,&amp;quot;. 
On my way out I peered out the the window. Oh no. There _he_ was. It was Ryan.
&amp;quot;Think fast!&amp;quot; I mumbled to myself. I slipped into Susan's coat closet. I was going to wait until they left. Their was a knock on the front door and Susan came down the stairs in her dress. The door squeaked open.
&amp;quot;Hey, cutie!&amp;quot; he said. I felt tears in my eyes.
&amp;quot;Hey,&amp;quot; she said as she kissed him. 
&amp;quot;Ready?&amp;quot; asked Susan. Ryan nodded. 
&amp;quot;Hold on. Let me just get my coat,&amp;quot; said Susan. Oh no.</subtitle>
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