Comments on 'From Inside The Wonderball part 2'Emily is frustrated with the system of communication not sure if Dana is getting everything she is saying. Ed walks over to the window. Emily walks away.
"It can be tricky, you'll get the hang of it." Ed smiles at his new friend.
"I hope not! I don't want to get the hang of anything, I want to get out of here ASAP!" Emily yells
Ed stands in front of the window and begins to communicate with Dana. He says "Don’t leave she’s lying!"
Emily freaks out. "What are you doing?"
Ed again smiles this time less friendly than the times before. "I've been in her for around fifty years, when I get visitors I like to hold on to them for at least a few years."
Emily just stares at the old man, if she had a gun, he'd be dead.
"I'm joking of course, Dana is not the one we want taking this journey, too dangerous for her. We need someone who is one tough enough to handle this and two able to believe two people are trapped in this ball of plastic."
Emily looks up at Ed "My big brother Chris"2008-06-13T09:09:10Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/33850Comment on From Inside The Wonderball part 2<p>old guy… dumbledore…<br />ok done. <br />what now…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33850?basename=704942008-06-13T09:09:10Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on From Inside The Wonderball part 2<p>hahaha creepy old guy. <br /> GO CHRIS !!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33850?basename=701442008-06-12T02:51:04ZLovingYourHeartbreak♥http://ficlets.com/authors/xoxoComment on From Inside The Wonderball part 2<p>I can’t believe she’s willing to bring her brother into this…. thats creepy! along with the old guy =]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33850?basename=700252008-06-11T20:11:48ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on From Inside The Wonderball part 2<p> LOL sailor emo! That <strong>would</strong> be funny.</p>
<p>Awesome job on this ficlet. You did a great job of painting the picture of what is going on. I can picture the look on Emily’s face when the guy said “I like to keep my visitors for a few years”.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33850?basename=697382008-06-10T22:24:14ZHunting Beautyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/missourigirlComment on From Inside The Wonderball part 2<p> LOL sailor emo!!!! XD</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33850?basename=697262008-06-10T22:02:35ZBartimaeushttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_7307Comment on From Inside The Wonderball part 2<p>gah! When I read the ” I like to keep my visitors” i was like RAPE !!! RAPE !!!! CREEPY OLD GUY !!!! lmao the whole time.<br />But wouldn’t that be wierd if Dana started reading and suddenlyy…<br /><em> RAPE !...RAPE!...RAPE!... Jk!</em><br /> LMAO </p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33850?basename=696022008-06-10T15:30:27ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_loveComment on From Inside The Wonderball part 2<p>Nice twist. Teensy edit: “begisn” should be “begins”</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/33850?basename=695932008-06-10T14:37:24ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunk