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  <title>Comments on 'Baited Breath'</title>
  <subtitle>I watched with baited breath. In silence I knelt, crouching, peering snapping photos.

I heard their wind carried voices, &#8220;Right you are Bob, this is a right a heavy one we got here,&#8221; said the taller of the grave robbers.

They pulled the coffin from the wet ground, I could hear them grunting.


&#8220;What, did you ear that Bob?,&#8221; said the lanky one, &#8220;I thought I heard a noise.&#8221;

&#8220;You didn&#8217;t ear it from this one,&#8221; he laughed as he pointed at the cadaver.
I panicked and ran as fast and as far as I could in the thick mud beneath me.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-07-23T18:26:49Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Baited Breath</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I like that last sentence.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-07-23T18:26:49Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>smarty101</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Baited Breath</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;whoa, what&amp;#8217;s with the multi-sequels??? Does one choose then go from there?  What?!  I&amp;#8217;m confused!!! (sorry, overreacting&amp;#8230;)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-22T22:48:04Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>g2 (la pianista irlandesa)</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Baited Breath</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Good job in portraying the two bumbling grave robbers.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-13T06:26:03Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Baited Breath</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I love the line &lt;em&gt;you didn&amp;#8217;t ear it from this one&lt;/em&gt;. Very funny. Now, what&amp;#8217;s going on with all the sequels to this one? Off to read them, one by one.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-11T13:40:11Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Baited Breath</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;me too&amp;#8230; lol gotta love choices!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-10T23:40:43Z</published>
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      <name>Sailor Emo</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Baited Breath</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Holy cow! What&amp;#8217;s going on here? I want to read this, but I&amp;#8217;m confused by the sequels.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-10T23:36:14Z</published>
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      <name>John Perkins</name>
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