the essence of you lingers deep into my soul your where like a soft drizzle of rain and I was a wilted flower you nourished me and brought me back to life you came into my life in a time when I was crestfallen a time when I could not love any more your mirthful soul and courteousness captivated me our souls came together just as destiny called for it to happen so you could be the rain a I a radiant flower 2008-06-11T02:52:52Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/33981 <p>beautiful poem, wondeful imagery and it flows nicely=].</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33981?basename=69825 2008-06-11T02:52:52Z One Time, One Chance http://ficlets.com/authors/one_chance <p>Gah sorry! When I said correction in 3rd sentence i meant 4th</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33981?basename=69816 2008-06-11T02:34:26Z Sailor Emo http://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love <p>In the 2nd sentence &#8220;where&#8221; should be were, welted=wilted<br />3rd sentence should be &#8220;came INTO my life&#8221; right?<br />And in the last sentense it should be <br />&#8220;so you could be the rain a <strong>I</strong> a radiant flower&#8221; <br />No tbeing mean! I&#8217;m just trying to help out =D<br />lovely poem! I hope to see more! (Im adding you as a contact by the way).</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/33981?basename=69815 2008-06-11T02:29:56Z Sailor Emo http://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love