Comments on 'yin and yang'His heart in my pocket, tears on my chest,
had no idea what to do with the rest.
Could not just throw them in the rubbish bin!
The garden! The shed! The yang to my yin.2008-06-12T20:14:57Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/34004Comment on yin and yang<p>I really liked this. I’m a sucker for poetry, whether it’s iambic or whatever.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34004?basename=703582008-06-12T20:14:57Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on yin and yang<p>hey i fixed that second line on the romeo and juliet, good looking out.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34004?basename=702122008-06-12T12:40:55ZMighty-Joe Younghttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_8969Comment on yin and yang<p>ok i think this is anapestic tetrameter instead of iambic,now before you fire at me,i say that because you can’t go by syllables because meter has to account for colloquial diction and dialect, for instance in mississippi where i am from the word shit which is one syllable can be a be a complete dactic foot SHHE EIH et where as mutherfucter which is four syllables can be pronounced in one throchaic foot, i see how you are counting it but it just feel like – - + triplet to me. loved it</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34004?basename=701972008-06-12T09:28:03ZMighty-Joe Younghttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_8969Comment on yin and yang<p>trying to keep it in iambic pentameter form, even though I find a iambic tetrameter much easier to read.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34004?basename=698492008-06-11T05:55:27ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunk