What could he have done? He was so numb that even the tears would not, could not, fall. There was no logic to it. How could someone become so cold that even when the sun shone brightly, a rain seemed to overcome. Emotions could only be described as absent and carelessness had become a habit. His spirit was broken, just like his heart, and he was unable to fix them. Had the pain been to much to bear, or had it simply become so routine that he could feel nothing else? The only thing he knew was that he wanted, even needed, to feel something. 2007-05-28T14:41:14Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/3401 <p>I really like this.. I went through the same phase when my dad died. But I got over eventually&#8230; not quite sure how.<br />The only thing I could think of is maybe saying &#8220;I&#8221; instead of &#8220;he,&#8221; just because it sounds more direct.<br />But that&#8217;s just me. It&#8217;s your writing piece. Again, nice job!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/3401?basename=2359 2007-05-28T14:41:14Z AeroPen http://ficlets.com/authors/user_1987 <p>This was great. I could see this as an anime series for some reason&#8230;</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/3401?basename=2340 2007-05-28T02:03:19Z Laine the Grey http://ficlets.com/authors/lainegrey <p>Wow, I really like this one. Sadly it reminds me of me a few months ago. Sequel could be something with suicide/self harm&#8230;</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/3401?basename=2337 2007-05-28T01:32:01Z Saint Chuck http://ficlets.com/authors/chuck_thelove <p>I need help! Please criticize this piece to point me in the right direction!! Thanks</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/3401?basename=2336 2007-05-28T01:26:51Z brunettechick http://ficlets.com/authors/user_2391