- Carlene - &quot;Yes that's it.&quot; I answered her second question, panic filled me when I thought about her first. Yes I knew my pack would fight, we were not like others, my pack was mean and heartless. Not to mention a thousand or so werewolves made up our pack, largest in the world. &quot;They may not win, is that what has you worried?&quot; Renita's voice caught me off guard. &quot;I mean if their all as small as you.&quot; She had turned back to her human form to get up the cliff, the gash on her leg becoming more pronounced without fur. I turned my head to stare at her, she was fully dressed with short red hair which matched the fur of her wolflike self. Her eyes were a deep hazelnut brown, they widened as she took in my golden eyes. &quot;I am the smallest in the pack, and yes they will fight...&quot; I stopped for a brief second deliberating on my next words. &quot;To the death,&quot; I finaly said aloud. Renita's eyes widened with fear, &quot;how big are the others?&quot; &quot;Most are twice my size or bigger!&quot; I answered truthfully. 2008-07-04T21:25:26Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/34016 <p>&#8220;their&#8221; should be &#8220;they&#8217;re,&#8221; and you have more of those sentences that should be split into separate ones—but the story you are telling is good.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/34016?basename=76274 2008-07-04T21:25:26Z Robotech_Master http://ficlets.com/authors/robotech <p>awesome you guys these are so good</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/34016?basename=70001 2008-06-11T17:45:36Z Scene_Sierra http://ficlets.com/authors/sierara <p>very lovely</p> <p>by the way im not me im my friend amanda</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/34016?basename=69886 2008-06-11T12:37:44Z Whinney http://ficlets.com/authors/eldarwin