Comments on 'Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.'After Ethan Jr enjoyed the Hookah and a few drinks he was feeling relaxed. His sister Melanie was talking, but he wasn't really listening to a word she said.
He knew she was probably talking about a Louis Vuitton bag or shoes or whatever it was the French designer made.
With each fresh drink he got drunker and louder.
"Mel, didya shee who jusht came in the door?", Ethan said.
Melanie looked. "Oh, isn't he McHottie from that law show?,"she said excitedly.
"Thash the guy," Ethan drooled as McHottie approached.
McHottie, also known as Daniel Danko, took Melanies hand and genlty kissed it.
Melanie blushed and giggled.
Ethan Jr, face flushed with jealousy said, "Hey jerk, keep your McHottie hands off my shister."
"Back off sissyboy," McHottie said and shoved Etahn Jr. back into his chair.
Ethan got up in a rage, sucker punched the unsuspecting actor, who fell to the floor, screaming, "He boke by dose."
"Eeth, lets get outta here, now," his sister demanded as she dragged him away through the crowd.2008-06-13T04:00:35Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/34053Comment on Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.<p>ty Punk, i shall use that..</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34053?basename=704482008-06-13T04:00:35ZKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.<p>Skeet, you are a master at dialogue. Maybe, just to make it a little more real it should be “He boke by dose”? Very funny!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34053?basename=702262008-06-12T14:35:04ZPyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)http://ficlets.com/authors/pyropunkComment on Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.<p>in all the ficlets I have read, none have made me laugh from begining to end. This was hilarious! Man Ethan is such a lightweight.. Hes slurring after a couple of drinks!? Come on, hes high class he shouldnt be a rookie!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34053?basename=700722008-06-11T23:12:23ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27Comment on Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.<p>in all the ficlets I have read, none have made me laugh from begining to end. This was hilarious! Man Ethan is such a lightweight.. Hes slurring after a couple of drinks!? Come on, hes high class he shouldnt be a rookie!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34053?basename=700712008-06-11T23:12:22ZApostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27