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  <title>Comments on 'Daddy's Home Part III'</title>
  <subtitle>Susan cried a horrible scream. &#8220;Mommy!&#8221; Timmy no longer whispered as he jumped from his bed. His tiny fists pumping at his father&#8217;s legs, &#8220;leave my mommy alone.&#8221;

Harold kicked the boy backwards into a desk, and landed another fist on Susan&#8217;s face. &#8220;You stupid bitch. I&#8217;m tired of your god damn mouth.&#8221; His large hands curled tightly around her throat. With each gargled scream his fingers squeezed tighter. &#8220;I told you to shut up bitch.&#8221;

&#8220;Get off of her you asshole.&#8221; Joe jumped down from his bunk and grabbed an aluminum bat that was tossed on the floor from an earlier game of baseball in the park. For a split second he thought about how much fun the day had been until this moment, when his father came home. Drunk. Again. &#8220;Get the fuck off of her,&#8221; he repeated.

Harold turned to see his son advancing on him, baseball bat loosely perched above his head. &#8220;Put that bat down boy.&#8221; Susan dropped to the floor, coughing violently, once her throat was free. &#8220;I&#8217;m gonna kick your ass if you don&#8217;t put that down right now.&#8221;</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-06-24T15:35:50Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Daddy's Home Part III</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Intense&amp;#8230;I hope it&amp;#8217;s batter-up time in the next ficlet.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-24T15:35:50Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Browncoatben</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on Daddy's Home Part III</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;wow.. hope the mother is ok..&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/34242?basename=70534</id>
    <published>2008-06-13T14:34:13Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Apostrophe </name>
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