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  <title>Comments on 'The Pool'</title>
  <subtitle>So I get into the freezing.. Well it's not freezing ,but really, really, cold. Especially for me, because I get cold very easily! So i let my self in gently. Actually sctratch that, I practically jumped in, and then I started shivering of (of course). Then I started swimming.... I immediately thought the water is soft today.. I realized what I thought and I said 
(underwater mind you) I'm insane! So then, I come up gasping for breath. And, then I think I just thought 
&amp;quot; The water is soft today&amp;quot; 
I must be out of my mind...
The water had a certain feel to though...
I just &amp;quot;soft&amp;quot; is just what came to mind.....</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-06-17T01:43:58Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Pool</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;With some judicious editing, this could be really very good. I like the matter-of-fact tone throughout &amp;#8211; it made me smile.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-06-17T01:43:58Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ana Cristina</name>
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