Comments on 'Hi, Who Are You?'"I'm serious," he said, raising his thin eyebrows.
"I know," I replied, and sniffed my short hair.
God, I hated talking about Jack. I hated talking about that whole damn family but it just seemed to come up like vomit.
"Do you use the 'l' word?" Out of the corner of my eye I saw him look down.
I chuckled sadly, "Do you use the 'z' word?"
"Zipper?" he mocked with fake awe.
"Shh," I teased, "Don't say that so loud.. The 'l' word?"
He drew cirlces on the center of the flower.
"Oh," it hit me, "Love?"
He drew a smiley on my thin hand.
"No."
"I knew it!" he said, looking very much like a five year old on christmas morning.
"Do you?" I asked, skeptic and wanting something against him.
"Yes."
"What's her name?" I tried to keep the dissapointment out of my voice.2008-06-22T15:43:53Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/34856Comment on Hi, Who Are You?<p>Great job with the randomness of <em>“Do you use the ‘z’ word?”</em></p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34856?basename=729832008-06-22T15:43:53ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on Hi, Who Are You?<p>i love how the two are flirting with each other.. like they <em>know</em> that they like each other, and yet their going out with other people..<br />..hahhaa..friends with benifits?<br />XD<br />=]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34856?basename=728992008-06-22T04:13:32ZOne Time, One Chancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/one_chanceComment on Hi, Who Are You?<p>Hm… interesting development… Sequel soon plz!!!!!<br />_ looking very much like a five year old on christmas morning._<br />-excellent imagery.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/34856?basename=724332008-06-20T18:47:48ZDreamerhttp://ficlets.com/authors/dreamer