Booking took ages; time that only a veteran of the D.M.V could identify with. A lifetime in booking ended in a less than cordial ten man cell that housed fifteen. &quot;G white(that is what all the black inmates called the white prisoners in Orleans Parish Prison) get out from in front of the T.V.&quot; I turned around in the only place in the cell that didn't house a cramped prisoner either playing cards, sleeping or reading the bible. &quot;Yo G white it's your minute a fame ye' hurd may.&quot; &quot;At 6 o'clock a New Orleans male escort named Wallace Marvel was arrested in the french quarter for the Murder of local disk jockey Jonathon Butcha.&quot; The lady reported. &quot;Damn You was set up Playa!&quot; &quot;No i Kilt em!&quot; &quot;Damn G white is Gangsta! Ya Hurd May.&quot; &quot;Sir i am not unsociable but i have been in holding for 3 days, because i just committed my first murder. Please don't take offense but get your black ass outta my new bunk.&quot; He had to be humiliated when a cosmopolitan fag kicked him till he passed out,then took his bunk. 2008-06-26T05:27:46Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/35353 <p>Whoa with the title, Trifalmadorian. Even if you wrote shizznit, or some such variation, it would be better. I don&#8217;t want them making you pull it down because it&#8217;s a neat read otherwise.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73964 2008-06-26T05:27:46Z Ana Cristina http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78 <p>Oh that was refering to the guy he had kicked in the face until passed out and then gave up his bunk. Which i know by experience is the only way to get a bunk in southside H.O.D in O.P.P. Where they keep the capitol offenders and escape artists.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73937 2008-06-26T04:07:35Z Mighty-Joe Young http://ficlets.com/authors/user_8969 <p>I&#8217;m a little confused about the last sentence, who does &#8220;he&#8221; refer to? Because it was written in first person so maybe its just a mistake.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73934 2008-06-26T03:59:14Z RainDance http://ficlets.com/authors/raindance <p>wow. Not what i expected, but I like it.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73923 2008-06-26T01:54:57Z RainDance http://ficlets.com/authors/raindance <p>&#8220;G white?&#8221; Never heard that. When I was in jail, us honkeys were referred to as &#8220;woods,&#8221; a shortened version of &#8220;peckerwoods.&#8221; <br />You&#8217;ve definitely got some flair when it comes to telling a story, but I think the writing itself needs to be cleaned up a little (cleaned up as in grammar and flow, not the cursing).</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73850 2008-06-25T21:22:20Z John Perkins http://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21 <p>Title alone needs a &#8216;mature&#8217; tag, buddy. Let&#8217;s keep it PG for the kiddies.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73793 2008-06-25T14:29:41Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 <p>I&#8217;m likinig this alot !! Very fresh!<br />Nothing like a good &#8220;Oz&#8221; story! :)</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73784 2008-06-25T13:47:58Z ALRO613 ♪ LoA ♫ http://ficlets.com/authors/alro613 <p>So what we have on our hands is a real tough guy, a little bit cranky, but definitely a tough guy.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73763 2008-06-25T12:24:41Z thebetweenspace http://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace <p>cool story.. sorry i don&#8217;t have any bobble heads to confer with.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35353?basename=73751 2008-06-25T06:00:35Z Apostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27