Comments on 'Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully'Sully was looking out the window as his father carried on about something that was happening at work, interjecting a, "Really," and, "Wow," at all the correct moments.
He really didn't care what the conversation was about only that it was happening. His focus was on the outside world. Lately, Sully had been "seeing" more black shapes slipping by in his peripheral vision and it disturbed him.
He had blurted out, "Did you see that?" so many times that his family had started to tease him at random moments. It had gone so far as to having his annoying little sister wake him up screaming, "Sully, did you see that?" at four in the morning.
He had always seemed to "catch" glimpses of things out of the corners of his eye but never really paid that much attention to it, until they started to take on shapes. Within the past month, he was certain he had seen a man, a dog, and a plethora of other shapes he could almost name but not quite. They weren't just wisps of shadows anymore.
"Sully, did you see that?"2008-07-15T00:58:15Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/35765Comment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>@create sounds like you have ideas dont side seat write sequel fool sequel</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=800592008-07-15T00:58:15ZMighty-Joe Younghttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_8969Comment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>thats great. i love how they would tease him, have him prove them wrong, by something happenin to the family and he saves them. then tease them.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=777902008-07-08T23:02:57Zcreatefreelyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/musicislifeComment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>Very cool. Sort of Twilight Zone-ish.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=771722008-07-07T14:02:18ZRainDancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/raindanceComment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>Cool start to a series. I’m hooked.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=765342008-07-05T20:26:43Z♠Ana Cristina♥http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>Nice setup, I can’t wait to see where you take this. :)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=751882008-07-01T12:25:23ZKevMullinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/kevmullinsComment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>I like it a lot. It remind me of some dreams I had where like Sully I could see such things (glad I’m not having those dreams any more).</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=750302008-06-30T19:29:14Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspaceComment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>hey this really sucked me in i wrote the sequels in the waiting room while my life was in th er. sorry baby if you read this.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=749512008-06-30T06:04:30ZMighty-Joe Younghttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_8969Comment on Peripheral Evil: Part 1, Sully<p>Cool. Sounds ominous.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/35765?basename=749362008-06-30T05:15:01ZJohn Perkinshttp://ficlets.com/authors/johnperkins21