The dent on the wall only frustrates me further as the my knuckles begin to turn red. _Screaming_ was all I could hear. Bloody, dark, hateful _screaming_... Whether it was from inside of me or from my ipod i couldn't tell, but it was everywhere... I kneeled on the bed and hit my arm as hard as I could. _Damnit you know this will only make things worse..._ I think as I punch the same dent in the wall as before, this time making a small hole. _It's ok... my parents won't look in the closet..._ I can't think, and the one hope I did have was smashed to a thousand pieces. _You heard what she said... don't fool yourself..._ Suddenly I am overcome by a blinding wave of absolute hatred and malice. I began pounding the wall over and over again until I couldn't feel my knuckles. I yelled out into the stillness of my room, with no answer. Just an annoying air of silence that seemed to laugh at me. As I regained my senses, music found my ears: _and still you want to end your life..._ 2008-07-05T22:45:05Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/35938 <p>aww thanks guys =) <br />it really makes my day to see such positive comments on my writing</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35938?basename=76570 2008-07-05T22:45:05Z Bartimaeus http://ficlets.com/authors/user_7307 <p>I completely agree with everyone, this is a great ficlet with some of the greastest imagery I&#8217;ve ever seen and some of the rawest feelings. Awesome job!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35938?basename=75312 2008-07-01T18:29:39Z penguincaptain18 http://ficlets.com/authors/user_5439 <p>Very tense. The imagery is strong and the inner thoughts of the character help the reader figure out your narrator&#8217;s need for violence.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35938?basename=75244 2008-07-01T15:27:33Z Ana Cristina http://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78 <p>I like the raw emotion of the story. Very well done. I like how you incorporated the music in there as well. Those walls can be real assholes sometimes, you know.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35938?basename=75211 2008-07-01T13:13:48Z thebetweenspace http://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace <p>omg.. this story is emotionally packed. i could almost see you pounding your fist into a wall. Or the person in the story rather. Excellent descriptions. ha ha im number 14.. thats cool. Thank you!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35938?basename=75182 2008-07-01T11:06:13Z Apostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27 <p>wow<br />this is really good.<br />probably one of the best ficlets i&#8217;ve read so far<br />really good job.<br />:)<br />5 star <ins>++</ins>++</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/35938?basename=75130 2008-07-01T03:18:14Z sunshine_loves_moon http://ficlets.com/authors/sunshine_loves_moon