Comments on 'The New Boy, The Old Boy, and The Present Boy: Part 5'"What was that about?"
Joey came up to me after class.
"I'm sorry!"
"You shouldn't be looking at other boys when you have a boyfriend!"
"I'm sorry! He was just cute!"
"Oh, really? Cuter then me?"
"How selfcentered are you? What do you think you the cutest boy in school or something?"
He was but, you know what I mean!
"Yea maybe I do!"
"Well he may not have been as cute as you, but he was probably a lot nicer then you!
"Maybe then he can be your boyfriend then!"
He stomped off.
"Come back Joey! Please!"
He looked back at me and ran off.2008-07-04T05:52:01Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/36169Comment on The New Boy, The Old Boy, and The Present Boy: Part 5<p>Joey needs to grow up just a little bit cuz there’s no way that he’s not looking at all the cute girls around him just cuz he has a gf. It goes against human nature. Again, you can look but don’t touch. There’s nothing wrong with looking and if Joey can’t realize this then she needs to dump him.<br />Anyways, I’m really starting to like this series I just wish you’d have made this part a little longer. Maybe they could have argued more to heighten the drama. Otherwise great job!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/36169?basename=761732008-07-04T05:52:01Zpenguincaptain18http://ficlets.com/authors/user_5439