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  <title>Comments on 'Promises, Hidden, Lies, and Forgiven'</title>
  <subtitle>Promises were made
And I thought you would never lie 
You said if you broke a promise
The next thing you would do is die 

Well right now your still here
 But your lies broke my heart 
I never should of believed you
I knew it from the start 

I don't want to be harsh
Or hurt you in any way
But when I make a promise 
I try to keep the promises that I say 

I have faith in you
But, I really don't have trust 
You told promises just to break them
And now I'm left in the dust 

Why did I believe you?
Why did I let it slide? 
You didn't even apologize 
And all you can do is hide 

Hidden away in your lies
Forgive, I may not
Promises, there were few
But lies, there were a lot

So I'm just going to sit here
And hopefully you'll learn
I may, just may forgive
But my trust you'll have to earn

Of course I'll always love you
Your the reason that I'm here
Even though I may get angry
I know you'll always be near

At times we might not get along
We may just disagree 
But I know we have each other forever
Just you, and me </subtitle>
  <updated>2008-07-09T02:23:52Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Promises, Hidden, Lies, and Forgiven</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;To tell the truth, it actually wasn&amp;#8217;t all about my crushes this time, it was about a personal experience&amp;#8230;thanks for the comments though! &lt;br /&gt;P.S.Certain guys do lie a lot, though!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-07-09T02:23:52Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Writer4Life00nj</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Promises, Hidden, Lies, and Forgiven</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;this poem is so true and real and i can totally relate to it from my own experiences&lt;br /&gt;its so well portrayed and you can visualize it so well from the descriptions and thoughts put into the poem&amp;#8230;&lt;br /&gt;=D&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/36711?basename=77874</id>
    <published>2008-07-09T02:22:06Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>DOGScare Me JK</name>
      <uri>http://ficlets.com/authors/baldrick</uri>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Promises, Hidden, Lies, and Forgiven</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Welcome to the world of me. No offense to the guys on here, but guys tend to lie, a lot. Very great poem!&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-07-09T02:18:58Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Blusparrow</name>
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