Comments on 'My First Ficlet/Jacek's new beginning'"Dong! Welcome to door nine-teen, The gateway to hell! Have a nice day." Spoke the unnaturally cheery voice. It seemed quite soothing despite its notification towards hell and all. The doors before him parted giving way to a quaint stony room, with archways that loomed and shadows cast out. Mildly afraid, but over all okay with it, Jacek stepped out from the elevator, allowing it to close as the voice echoed a nice "Good Bye!".
Light. An absence of light. As the content nature Jacek just had slowly diminished, fear began to take hold. Where was he? No matter how far he had walked down, it was as though the end was never coming. And though he didn't feel he was nearing and end, the room about him was becoming darker. Darker. Darker yet. His ears perked up. An echo, something far off. Soft, but signifying that there was another force of life in this room. He was no longer alone.2008-07-15T04:42:10Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/36838Comment on My First Ficlet/Jacek's new beginning<p>Welcome to Ficlets,well told tale, like the game show host quailty of the voice. and the elevator to Hell concept.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/36838?basename=801502008-07-15T04:42:10ZM.Paul Regrethttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_7581Comment on My First Ficlet/Jacek's new beginning<p>A sequel, a sequel, I wrote you a sequel. <—sing it</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/36838?basename=796992008-07-14T02:23:57ZRainDancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/raindanceComment on My First Ficlet/Jacek's new beginning<p> AHHHHH !!! That was a happy ahhhh. Thank you, Mr. Don’t-Compare-My-Work-To-Anything-Else-Cuz-I-Think-It’s-Original. I knew you’d realize you should join eventually.</p>
<p>Very nice little ficlet btw.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/36838?basename=788152008-07-11T02:31:03ZRainDancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/raindanceComment on My First Ficlet/Jacek's new beginning<p><strong> WELCOME TO FICLETS !</strong></p>
<p>That was actually very good for a first ficlet.</p>
<p>You’ve beaten me in that regard…</p>
<p>Can’t wait to see what happens to Jacek.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/36838?basename=784452008-07-10T04:07:01ZOrangeOreoshttp://ficlets.com/authors/orangeoreosComment on My First Ficlet/Jacek's new beginning<p>Ha, why take a Stairway to Heaven when you can take the Elevator to Hell?<br />Zany, but foreboding at the same time. I mean, who really goes into Hell feeling “okay with it.” <br />The sentence “<em>As the content nature…</em>” gave me pause because it seems awkwardly worded, and I had to read it a few times to get what you were saying.<br />Other than that, welcome to Ficlets. It’s kinda like hell in that you never get away once you get here. But it’s more fun than Hell.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/36838?basename=784422008-07-10T03:57:04ZJLaughterhttp://ficlets.com/authors/jlaughter