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  <title>Comments on 'Alive part 8'</title>
  <subtitle>For the second time, my eyes snapped open.
Sweat ran from the top of my head even though I felt ice cold. Numbness had me completely still. My lips shielded the scream that thrashed to escape from my lungs. 
It was now 12:06. This must be some type of joke.
You've done this to me. 
I thought you cared. 
I thought I could trust you. 
I gave you my heart but instead of gently placing it down you shattered it under your own bloody feet. 
I hope I can get my revenge. 
I won't rest until the day you die.
If I could think of anything more painful to say I would, but for now I just hope you croak.
Though the sad this is.... I don't hate you at all.
&amp;quot;William!&amp;quot; I screamed to the empty room.
The only thing that answered was a tear slipping from the corner of my eye.
I sat up while the sheets tried to unstick themselves from my perspiring body.
Now sitting upright, I felt as if I might fall right back down.
I left myself limp to fall to the bed but instead crashed to the bleak floorboards.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-07-13T00:50:39Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Alive part 8</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;]:&lt;br /&gt;heartbreak is miserable&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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