Comments on 'Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers'"Father! We need to talk!" Kira pleaded, his eyes shining. He couldn't remember being this happy.
"Not now son. The ring your dragon attacked was only partially finished. And only one battalion was there. You need a strategy."
"Come to my tent!" bellowed Perceval in his egotistical way.
Kira followed, but only because he didn't want to be separated from his father. Olgoth walked with a slight limp from being dropped and he winced as his burns rubbed on his clothes.
Katra followed too. She couldn't bear to be separated from Kira, much to his embarrassment, but she proved useful in getting water, salve, and bandages for Olgoth's wounds.
Once he was properly bandaged, Olgoth began to draw in the dirt inside the tent. He drew the five rings, the coast, and where he'd overheard the armies were moving to camp.
Kira just stared at his father. He never knew how smart, and brave he was. He thought about how he must have had a loyal following for so many men to be willing to claim his name.
Who was this man?2008-08-27T15:26:21Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/38097Comment on Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers<p>It is a complete sentence! There’s a verb and a noun. Sounds like Kira’s dad changed a bit when he left…. And I’m starting to feel bad for Katra! She’s <em>worse</em> than a puppy!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/38097?basename=898512008-08-27T15:26:21ZOrangeOreoshttp://ficlets.com/authors/orangeoreosComment on Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers<p>katra followed too is not a complete sentence.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/38097?basename=873272008-08-15T01:58:19ZNot Youhttp://ficlets.com/authors/littlealibyeComment on Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers<p>hahahah. poor kira and katra…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/38097?basename=865292008-08-12T15:25:26Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers<p>Mwa-ha-ha! I’m on to you, Man! Of course it wasn’t finished, the tax collector was building it, “carting dirt up to a height of 16 feet” remember? okay, so for one really weird moment we are on the same brain wavelength. Yikes! Go ahead and sequel!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/38097?basename=822212008-07-22T21:12:42ZMistress Elsha Hawkhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawkComment on Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers<p>oh look i was going to sequel and say it wasnt finished that is why it fell ‘Get out of my mind!!!!!”lol</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/38097?basename=822042008-07-22T20:32:18ZMighty-Joe Younghttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_8969