Comments on 'On His Hands'i can hear you whispering to my heart,
even though your lips are sealed.
i will never forget those nights, when,
slowly,
carefully,
silently,
your fingers sought out mine in the darkness,
enfolding me in something more inclusive than an embrace.
and in your hands, then,
i was sure you held something like my future.2007-06-18T18:40:31Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/4017Comment on On His Hands<p>This is so beautiful. There’s not really much else I can say.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/4017?basename=31142007-06-18T18:40:31Zhorrorfan13http://ficlets.com/authors/horrorfan13Comment on On His Hands<p>“i can hear you whispering to my heart,<br />even though your lips are sealed.” <br />I love with my heart and soul, this part.<br />i feel like crying</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/4017?basename=30632007-06-17T04:47:10ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_loveComment on On His Hands<p>Yay, another chance to make use of those ambiguous statements! I got to use the holding of the future for my sequel this time!</p>
<p>This story is a good example of the mind filling in certain blanks not described. By use of a few choice words, the author describes the scene thoroughly enough to get the point across without wasting space.</p>
<p>Good stuff.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/4017?basename=30522007-06-17T02:26:19ZPocketshttp://ficlets.com/authors/pocketsComment on On His Hands<p>beautiful</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/4017?basename=30462007-06-16T22:12:50ZFlirtingWithaBrickWallhttp://ficlets.com/authors/sanitytookaholiday