Will you miss me when I'm gone? Or will you keep living your life Just like nothing ever occurred? Why can't I see today how you will feel tomorrow? Will you miss me? Will I be just a bad memory of the past, A freak who couldn't take it any longer, Or will you remember me with joy in the soul? I'm going to miss you. now, and for all days to come, I sure can't hide my feelings for you, My heart hurts like nothing else. I'm almost gone now; Soon I'll be gone forever, And then you might see what I felt. But then it will be to late, Since I won't be there anymore. You were the dream of my life, Sadly all dreams must end; As the sun peaks over the trees, The dream starts to fade I could try to forget you. Perhaps I should try, but it won't work. I've tried so many times; But it doesn't matter, I can't forget you at all. I will never forget you. 2007-07-05T03:06:59Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/4847 <p>single gripe: the last line in the third stanza, its unneeded. other than that, its pretty good.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/4847?basename=4093 2007-07-05T03:06:59Z Suburban Saint http://ficlets.com/authors/suburbansaint <p>very good, very real, the emotion is good, keep up the good work : )</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/4847?basename=4079 2007-07-05T01:21:29Z SunEyedGirl http://ficlets.com/authors/lito