I look into your beautiful deep brown eyes and see you looking right back at me. You are listening to every word I say as if the future of the world depends on you listening to my pointless rambling. You gently stroke my hand sending soft tingles up my arm. As I tell you about how I hate my laugh you reply &quot;Your laugh is what I love about you&quot; in your deep voice. I love the time I spend in your powerful arms; you make me feel like the most beautiful girl in the world. I feel so safe here in your embrace and find it absolutely sexy that you are so strong that you could crush me in an instant but instead you hold me softly but firmly, like you will never hurt me and will never let go. So perfect. I feel so safe here encased by your sculpted biceps. I want so badly to kiss you right now but i can't because I remember you belong to that other girl, the one you call your girlfriend. So strong yet you will never hurt me, oh wait you have. You stole my heart, the only real hurt that can be caused in this world. 2007-08-17T16:27:30Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/5088 <p>I like the stream-of-consciousness style, mixed with near-lyrical prose.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=7535 2007-08-17T16:27:30Z Alexa ♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018 <p>beautiful writing. tragic, but beautiful.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=7470 2007-08-16T19:56:06Z blueyedwonder http://ficlets.com/authors/blueyedwonder <p>That&#8217;s really good. I like it. Keep writing =]</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=6949 2007-08-10T19:32:05Z Lindsay http://ficlets.com/authors/figureskater <p>i really like it</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=6485 2007-08-03T21:46:35Z Ms Kit Kat http://ficlets.com/authors/kat_parker <p>keep* sorry</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=6360 2007-08-02T16:23:09Z Ariel http://ficlets.com/authors/ariel <p>Wow, I did not expect that ending. It is beautifully written and comes you captive.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=6359 2007-08-02T16:22:23Z Ariel http://ficlets.com/authors/ariel <p>wonderfully descriptive</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=6276 2007-08-01T18:32:40Z starcrossed http://ficlets.com/authors/starcrossed <p>Aww&#8230;the end was so sad&#8230;I&#8217;ve felt like that before..</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=5312 2007-07-25T19:34:33Z Xela http://ficlets.com/authors/xela <p>i loved it.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=5215 2007-07-25T02:13:44Z beautiful http://ficlets.com/authors/user_3683 <p>Wow! I really liked that. Its somthing that I can relate to and so decriptive too! Fabulous job.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=5191 2007-07-25T00:52:04Z DreamGhost http://ficlets.com/authors/dreamghost <p>awwww thanks guys!!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=5162 2007-07-24T22:05:24Z Note In a Broken Bottle http://ficlets.com/authors/user_3017 <p>i just loved it soooo much i mean like that is soo.. i don&#8217;t even have words for it&#8230; i love every line from it so badly. Congratulations, it was perfect.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=5161 2007-07-24T21:43:19Z User 3583 http://ficlets.com/authors/user_3583 <p>Love it!!! I especially love this line &#8220;I feel so safe here in your embrace and find it absolutely sexy that you are so strong that you could crush me in an instant but instead you hold me softly but firmly, like you will never hurt me &#8221; Awesome&#8230;</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=4435 2007-07-11T21:34:16Z SunEyedGirl http://ficlets.com/authors/lito <p>Love the last line.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/5088?basename=4433 2007-07-11T21:00:41Z Storykeeper of Fae http://ficlets.com/authors/smile