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  <title>Comments on 'On the Way Home'</title>
  <subtitle>It was well past midnight. We had all of the car windows rolled down, and a balmy summer breeze filtered through my hair. He was driving, hands loosely draped over the wheel. I had my iPod in hand, choosing all of the songs that reminded me of him.

He had no idea.

His crystal-blue eyes flicked to the rear-view mirror.

&amp;quot;They all asleep?&amp;quot; he asked, referring to our friends occupying the back seat. I turned around. They were all nearly snoring, curled into one another like a basket of kittens.

&amp;quot;Yeah,&amp;quot; I said, smiling slightly. &amp;quot;Looks like it's just you and me.&amp;quot;

The highway stretched out before us, the horizon line illuminated orange. There was hardly anyone else out on the road. 

_Oh, it's what you do to me. Oh, it's what you do to me..._ I closed my eyes and opened myself up to the music, imagining an alternate reality in which he and I were a we. 

When I opened them again, I could tell he was glancing at me out of the corner of his eye. 

Silence.

Then: &amp;quot;Have I ever told you that you're beautiful?&amp;quot;</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-07-31T01:09:34Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on On the Way Home</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Wow, thanks guys! To be honest, this isn&amp;#8217;t one of my favorite Ficlets. But, yes, I love Hey There Delilah.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-31T01:09:34Z</published>
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      <name>[pens&amp;feathers]</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on On the Way Home</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;how sweet</content>
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    <published>2007-07-30T03:57:38Z</published>
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      <name>Sophia D'Soleil</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on On the Way Home</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I&amp;#8217;ve always liked your stories.  This one&amp;#8217;s no different.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-26T04:30:00Z</published>
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      <name>Stovohobo</name>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I love this. its really good and I love the visuals of the sunset and his eyes. And I like how you put lyrics to Hey There Delilah in the story.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-26T00:07:24Z</published>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;awww! That&amp;#8217;s so sweet. i loveee it!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-25T21:16:02Z</published>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That was beautiful.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-24T20:24:40Z</published>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I enjoy how the visuals (eyes flicking, a basket of kittens, orange line of horizon) evoke more than images: anxiety, warm comfort, and cold empty distance. I also like that we don&amp;#8217;t know for sure who says the last line. Well done.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-19T06:56:40Z</published>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;make a sequel!!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-16T03:08:19Z</published>
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