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  <subtitle>I looked up at the sky and remembered that night, so long ago, when you woke me up in the middle of the night and dragged me outside to lay on a picnic blanket and look up at the stars. 

_&amp;quot;It's beautiful, isn't it?&amp;quot; you asked me, and I nodded my head against your chest. You used to hate it when I did that - my hair always tickled your face._

_&amp;quot;D'you see that star right there?&amp;quot; you asked me, extending an arm in the direction of the sky. I nodded again. Your arm tightened around my shoulders. &amp;quot;That one can be ours,&amp;quot; you said, whispering in my ear._

_The cicadas were buzzing in the trees nearby. Noise from the cars passing by on Main Street. Somewhere, distantly, a radio played softly, the sound carried on the wind. Fireflies in the bushes. But, in that moment, all that existed was you and me and the coconut-y smelly of sunscreen on your skin._

_&amp;quot;Evie,&amp;quot; you said. &amp;quot;Every time you look at that star, I'm thinking about you.&amp;quot;_

I sat outside on the deck, looking at our star and wishing it was still true. </subtitle>
  <updated>2007-07-28T04:05:13Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on &amp;quot;That one can be ours.&amp;quot;</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;drop_dead_gorgeous. :]]&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-28T04:05:13Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>RunningWithScissors</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on &amp;quot;That one can be ours.&amp;quot;</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Absolutely lovely!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-26T16:54:30Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Fyora Cartagan</name>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Thank you! =)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-22T02:12:40Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>[pens&amp;feathers]</name>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Lovely romantic tone to it and still somewhat tragic.  Nice.  Not that tragedy is nice, but the piece is nice, despite the tragic part.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-21T17:34:25Z</published>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;i loveeeeeeeeeeee ittttttt&#9829;&#9829;&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;much luv&lt;br /&gt;props givenn&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-21T15:54:01Z</published>
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      <name>One Time, One Chance</name>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Oh, blissfully sweet.  You&amp;#8217;re great at romance.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-07-21T03:07:03Z</published>
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