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  <title>Comments on 'The Edge Of The World'</title>
  <subtitle>How does it feel
To have your turn 
To stand on the edge of the world
Maybe this time you'll learn

Our love was not a toy
But you played me real good
No one's gonna save you now
And no one ever could

Go ahead, take a look down
It's scary, when you're up above
When you know you're gonna lose your life
Or the only thing you've ever loved

It's a long fall, right?
Well have a nice trip down
I'll even give you a push, if you like
Can't wait til you hit the ground

Your pleas of love didn't get you far
You're a player but you don't know the game
You ruined me and I fell apart
My heart will never be the same

Piece by piece 
and mile by mile
I'll watch you fall
And simply smile

A smile so wide
And satisfied
It's hard to hide
Cuz you just died.</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-07-30T23:32:07Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Edge Of The World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;this is awesome. deep.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/5438?basename=6072</id>
    <published>2007-07-30T23:32:07Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>-LadyInRed-</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Edge Of The World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;wow amazing. u came up w/ this urself? nice&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/5438?basename=5391</id>
    <published>2007-07-26T03:09:53Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>The Ghost in the Machine</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Edge Of The World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Wow&amp;#8230; love it! : )&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/5438?basename=5095</id>
    <published>2007-07-23T18:32:04Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>SunEyedGirl</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Edge Of The World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Nice work, I like it.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/5438?basename=5080</id>
    <published>2007-07-23T02:54:41Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Saint Chuck</name>
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