I’ve fallen into step with you and your electric green eyes Broken through the fortress and the clever disguise So you locked down your heart and you swallowed the key And here I stand with empty hands and broken memories You’ve built a wall between us – and I’ve never been good at climbing fences 2007-08-02T17:36:35Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/6273 <p>I love the last line. The rhythm in it is also great, it amazes me how people can do that!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/6273?basename=6366 2007-08-02T17:36:35Z Storykeeper of Fae http://ficlets.com/authors/smile <p>I like the clever rhymes and the sad, but funny last line. Great poem!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/6273?basename=5853 2007-07-29T21:26:20Z Richard Peck http://ficlets.com/authors/richardp