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  <title>Comments on 'Rainy Football Day'</title>
  <subtitle>I woke up today and it was raining. It was like one of those pouring storms that make everything muddy. There was a break in the rain so I decided to go next door to 'the yard' to see what the guys were doing, with Ty and Teddy in mind. I walked over there and was imediately put on Teddy's football team not Ty's. We would usually play football on rainy days 'cuz it was fun to be tackled in the mud. After a couple of points were scored and a couple of downs my team unleashed their secret weapon, me. None of the boys could tackle me without a few tries so I could usually get it down atleast half the field. Just when we were about to break our huddle it started to rain. We need this touchdown to win the game so we played on. I got wide and open and Teddy threw me the ball, but Ty rushed in for the tackle. He tackled me and we rolled in the mud so I landed on top of him. Just when I was getting up, the rain still coming down, Ty kissed me right on the lips, for everyone to see!</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-09-19T20:43:20Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Rainy Football Day</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;a small criticism- this particular story isn&amp;#8217;t consistent. You woke up and it was raining but then as you were about to break up the huddle it began to rain&amp;#8230; you need to identify that it stopped raining or not wake up to the rain. or leave the rain out.. just a thought from a fellow writer.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-19T20:43:20Z</published>
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      <name>User 5245</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Rainy Football Day</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That seems kind of tacky, kissing her in front of all the mutual friends.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-19T19:17:24Z</published>
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      <name>Alexa &#9829;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Rainy Football Day</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;O&lt;br /&gt;M&lt;br /&gt;G&lt;br /&gt;!!!!!!!!!!&lt;br /&gt;speechless-ness&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-08-31T16:34:46Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>One Time, One Chance</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Rainy Football Day</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;is like the scene out of a book?&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/6691?basename=6493</id>
    <published>2007-08-03T22:04:07Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Rainy Football Day</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt; OMG , lol, lol&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-08-03T19:44:28Z</published>
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      <name>Phosphate11</name>
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