Comments on 'The Turn'We walked into my house. It was empty just like it always is during the day. I walked into the living room and sat on the couch. He sat next to me. I snuggled into him like I had done before and I turned to kiss him. He kissed back but only for a moment and then he stopped.
"I can't do this to you Lindsay."He said and stood up. That was the first time I had been called by my first name since second grade.
"What's the problem?"I asked.
"It's a joke."
"What"I questioned him.
"You're pretty, nice, fun, athletic but this is all a joke. The guys told me if I could like get you to like soften up and be more beautiful they would be nice to me in school. You know make me cool, but once I learned how nice and beautiful you really were I couldn't do it. I was becoming attached to you. I like you Linz, a lot. Please forgive me."He told this whole story me getting madder and madder.
"Get out"I screamed. He ran outside alpoligizing like crazy. The boys want beautiful and soft I'll show'em beautiful and soft.2007-09-24T22:00:40Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/6792Comment on The Turn<p>well, using anybody like that, whether you know them or not, is low. man, that’s just low.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=141052007-09-24T22:00:40Zblueyedwonderhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blueyedwonderComment on The Turn<p>Um, why’s everyone mad at Ty?<br />He didn’t know her when he took this bet, or whatever.<br />Her <strong>best friends</strong> on the other hand, set it up! And wanted videotape of it!<br />Creepy, bad friends!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=130282007-09-19T19:30:10ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018Comment on The Turn<p>“growl”</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=110612007-09-09T20:33:35ZDr. Lewhttp://ficlets.com/authors/shannahComment on The Turn<p>TY<br />I<br /> HATE <br /> YOU !!!!!!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=93982007-08-31T16:40:59ZOne Time, One Chancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/one_chanceComment on The Turn<p>!!! BAD TY !!!!!!<br />well at least you know how much teh readers like the stories if they respond so passionately…like me…lol</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=78762007-08-20T20:43:07Zblueyedwonderhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blueyedwonderComment on The Turn<p>creep! how could he do that????OMG!!!!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=67502007-08-07T17:05:55ZUser 4137http://ficlets.com/authors/user_4137Comment on The Turn<p>Nice turn!!!!!!! keep them coming :-)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=67472007-08-07T16:45:22ZUser 4136http://ficlets.com/authors/user_4136Comment on The Turn<p>Omg I knew that guy was a creep! He’s a creepy Andy!!!!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=66992007-08-07T02:49:45ZIheartSoccer x10http://ficlets.com/authors/iheartsoccer_x10Comment on The Turn<p>how could he???? leaves me wanting the next one.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=66032007-08-05T21:12:51ZPhosphate11http://ficlets.com/authors/phosphate11Comment on The Turn<p>I sense a plot, and payback. Mua ha ha ha.<br />Keep ‘em coming.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/6792?basename=66022007-08-05T20:54:51ZOfficiallyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/officially