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  <title>Comments on 'Closing Time'</title>
  <subtitle>She tops off his glass; she's leaning with her back to the bar, watching her now silent domain. &amp;quot;To curfew,&amp;quot; she says; she's the most dangerous woman he knows, but with her funny accent and plump figure and tired curls, she hides it well.

He's hunched over the bar. &amp;quot;Why'd you let me in? You hate me,&amp;quot; he says, a matter of fact.

&amp;quot;I was feeling generous,&amp;quot; she shrugs. &amp;quot;Besides; I was bored today. You are not a boring man. Change the game, and something new might happen.&amp;quot; 

&amp;quot;What is it you want?&amp;quot; he growls, a shout that was was strangled on the way out. He manages just enough nerve to look her in the eye. 

She gently smirks; a knowing quirk of her mouth she's never been good at hiding. &amp;quot;Lock up as you go,&amp;quot; she says as she leaves a key by his elbow. &amp;quot;Drop the key off in the morning.&amp;quot;

She leaves him there in the near dark, in the bar that still feels smoky though the patrons left hours ago. Outside cops prowl the streets; he nurses his drink, and thinks. And waits.</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-09-04T21:02:18Z</updated>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on Closing Time</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I like it, it&amp;#8217;s intriguing.  Different from your usual style as well.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-04T21:02:18Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Stovohobo</name>
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