Comments on 'You Had Me as Appetizer'I shook my head, looking at the waitress. "I guess I just won't have anything…"
She smiled slyly. "I think...I have the perfect appetizer for you. Come with me, I'll show you."
Curious, I followed her into the empty kitchen—then she kissed me full on the lips. I was too startled to resist, but then—something about her. I had to kiss her again.
Her kiss tasted—delicious. I didn't understand it, but I just had to keep kissing her. I barely noticed her giggling, or her unfastening her clothing and letting it fall to the floor.
What _was_ that taste? I kissed harder, nibbled, eyes closed, trying to figure it out. There was something in my mouth now—something that seemed to be _squirming._ I swallowed once, then again, and it was gone.
I opened my eyes. The waitress was gone—but her clothing was on the floor in front of me.
Did I hear a giggle coming from my stomach? Or was it just gas?
I went back out to my table, where another waitress was ready to take my order.2008-04-04T21:27:30Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/870Comment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>i’m speechless but i’m going to continue to read so it must be good right?<br />.<br />lol</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=543952008-04-04T21:27:30Zi live NYLSChttp://ficlets.com/authors/josieComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>Yeah, this is rather weird.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=531612008-03-31T14:43:47ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018Comment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>haha did he just eat her!?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=522482008-03-28T15:29:49ZFlute Loop<33http://ficlets.com/authors/sashaComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>haha, thats a twist on this story!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=515002008-03-25T16:37:35ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>haha, thats a twist on this story!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=514992008-03-25T16:37:34ZNissakithttp://ficlets.com/authors/nerissaComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>hahahahaha! this was funny! i liked it! it made me shudder but i laughed. nice=]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=513882008-03-25T02:54:00ZOne Time, One Chancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/one_chanceComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>In case folks haven’t yet guessed, this story was born from my misreading the title of the original ficlet, then double-taking…then deciding what I had originally <em>misread</em> the title as would make an amusing title for a follow-up ficlet. The whole thing kind of went on from there.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=512822008-03-24T22:12:40ZThroat Wolfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/throatwolfComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>I lol’ed at this one. Brilliant continuance from the previous one.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=512202008-03-24T19:10:08ZRidcully Calverthttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_joonComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>Gross! I was grossed out by the time she took him to the kitchen, and then…he ate her! That’s kind of funny in a morbid way.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=511912008-03-24T15:46:45ZStorykeeper of Faehttp://ficlets.com/authors/smileComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>wow. ugh eww. i cant believe he… ate her</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=511372008-03-24T03:41:18Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>Ha! A waitress that takes you to the food instead of bringing it to you. That’s funny.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=510462008-03-23T22:26:50ZJ.B. Williamshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_5182Comment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>Oh GEEZ !</p>
<p>Talk about a twist to the story!</p>
<p>Ugh…</p>
<p>There goes <em>my</em> appetite…</p>
<p>Good story, though!</p>
<p>LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=510122008-03-23T17:18:19ZOrangeOreoshttp://ficlets.com/authors/orangeoreosComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>ewww.. he eat her! aaaaa<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=509952008-03-23T16:09:33ZBlusparrowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrowComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>ugh!! thats just…..too much left for the imginaton!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=509632008-03-23T05:45:28ZGeheim Sir Ayitahttp://ficlets.com/authors/stephdoirComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>whoa.. teenage fantasy!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=509492008-03-23T02:41:25ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on You Had Me as Appetizer<p>Very different kind of story, sort of in the vein of <em>Being John Malcovich.</em></p>http://ficlets.com/stories/870?basename=506642008-03-22T03:15:38Zthebetweenspacehttp://ficlets.com/authors/thebetweenspace