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  <title>Comments on 'Lips'</title>
  <subtitle>No, NO, *NO*!! This is not happening! I can't fall in love with him! I won't fall in love with him. I pulled away from him and out of his warm, strong arms. I began to walk away. 
&amp;quot;Linz, please forgive me.&amp;quot; Ty started. I turned around and walked up to him. I stared into those big blue eyes.
&amp;quot;No. Ty I want to but I can't. We are still young and I just don't know anymore.&amp;quot; I stood up on my tip toes and I kissed his angel like lips. 
&amp;quot;Good-bye Ty.&amp;quot; I spoke quietly. I walked away. He didn't follow. He stood still almost not breathing. 


He watched me walk silently all the way back into my house, while fingering his lips. 

He sighed heavily and walked back to his house, like a retreat from war.</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-12-18T21:47:05Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;wow. that was really good. nice way to end the story. i like the &amp;#8220;retreat from war&amp;#8221; analogy.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=29135</id>
    <published>2007-12-18T21:47:05Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Dr. Mousse</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;come on, i&amp;#8217;m dying for the story to continue&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=16870</id>
    <published>2007-10-10T22:38:36Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>-LadyInRed-</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I agree with unknown and not discovered&amp;#8230; gosh thats a long name&amp;#8230; anyways I do agree, continue please!!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=14756</id>
    <published>2007-09-28T02:40:42Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Dreamer</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Okkk, all the people that are trying to continue your stories need to like, quit (no offense) bc they kinda ruin it for me personally. I love all the stories you wrote and i think u need to continue.  REALLY .&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=13382</id>
    <published>2007-09-21T01:27:35Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>unknown and not discovered....</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Good. Now dump the other one.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-19T22:13:25Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Alexa &#9829;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;okay, yeah, uhm, sequel or i will like, die.&lt;br /&gt;boom.&lt;br /&gt;u killed me.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=12635</id>
    <published>2007-09-17T20:24:40Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;ooh more more more plzzz&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-16T20:38:52Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;soooo needs a sequel&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=11888</id>
    <published>2007-09-13T21:21:42Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;&amp;#8220;almost not breath&amp;#8221; for a little longer and linz can be rid of u!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=11744</id>
    <published>2007-09-13T01:33:15Z</published>
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      <name>One Time, One Chance</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;owwwwwwch!!!! where can you go from here???&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9266?basename=11736</id>
    <published>2007-09-13T00:37:05Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Lips</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;ohhh that was good.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-13T00:32:47Z</published>
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