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  <title>Comments on 'The Journey'</title>
  <subtitle>It seems so odd that this is where I had been trying to get.

You never would've thought that all that I've said and done over the past few months was all so that I could end up here. Just looking at me you would be surprised.

Dressed well and with a certain look in my eye, rock bottom would not be my expected destination. But it's true, the demise of all that I am could not be a more appealing goal. After all, what I had done that was so amazing?

To be honest, my journey to where I am is probably the greatest acheivment that I could brag about. The only acheivment; that I've gotten to where I was going.

But now that I'm here, I take a look around.

From a distance, it seemed so beautiful. But from up close, is it what I really wanted? Is this what I've been working so hard for?

I'm not sure, but I don't have a choice anymore. After jumping off a cliff, your options aren't what they used to be. And now, falling to the ground, I can see all that I ever wanted. Standing up on the edge.</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-09-16T04:50:07Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Journey</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;wow. I definitely agree with kermitgorf. you are an amazing writer!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-16T04:50:07Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Spring Chicken</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Journey</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;thanks alot man&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/9467?basename=12387</id>
    <published>2007-09-16T04:41:54Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Suburban Saint</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Journey</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;your a really talented  writer&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-16T04:39:12Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>SKermitgorf</name>
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