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  <title>Comments on 'Standing On The Threshold'</title>
  <subtitle>I looked away from my father out the door at the storm. Lightning flashed overhead and crackled away over the treetops. The wind gusted a cool spray against my face. When I turned back to the cabin, the yellow light of the gas lantern flickered, and my father's eyes shone from deep shadows. &amp;quot;You shouldn't be here,&amp;quot; I said quietly. &amp;quot;You're dead.&amp;quot;

He nodded with a wry smile. &amp;quot;Nights like these, though,&amp;quot; he said, glancing deliberately at the storm, &amp;quot;have a way of bringing us out.&amp;quot;

I thought about this. &amp;quot;I almost didn't come up here at all, you know. The rain washed the road out in several places.&amp;quot;

He nodded. &amp;quot;They'll find your jeep down there in the river.&amp;quot; His voice was calm, like the soft grass over a grave. &amp;quot;Of course, after all this rain, they won't find it until spring.&amp;quot;

I scoffed, out of breath. &amp;quot;You think I'll crash my Jeep on the way down the hill?&amp;quot;

I felt a chill through my bones, heard the gentle rush of distant water.

&amp;quot;No, son,&amp;quot; he said, and his smile turned wistful. &amp;quot;You crashed on the way up.&amp;quot;</subtitle>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Standing On The Threshold</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;oh snap!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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      <name>ceyshe</name>
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