Katiebeth's StoriesSo I'm only teenager, and I love to write. So I'm not all that great I dont think, but I would LOVE for you to give me some advice on how I could make my writing better. Critic my writing in any way...only please do it in a helping way! Thanks!2007-08-18T12:46:19Zhttp://ficlets.com/feeds/author/katiebethIs it over?<p>“What a stupid idea!” I opened a jar of grape jelly and began to spred it over a piece of wheat bread. “She could never in a thousand year’s, get me to go to that party. HE would be there, and I have no idea on how I would be able to confront him! After the other night, I wouldnt ever be able to show my face around him again. The expression on his face after I’d slapped him in front of all of his friends and family, was horrid. The look in his eyes ripped and tore my insides apart, like I was a victim in Saw III . He meant the world to me, and I had to go off and screw things up.”</p>
<p>“Buzz, buzz…buzz buzz. My cell phone vibrated on the kitchen table beside me as I was putting away the dirty knife I used, away in the sink. I moved towards the phone to look at the caller Id. It read Jason. And with a quick breath I anwsered, ” Hello?” On the other end of the phone, I heard his voice, and a shudder of fear ran down my spine, for what would he have to say to me?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/57562007-07-25T04:55:20Z2007-08-18T12:46:19ZKatiebethhttp://ficlets.com/authors/katiebeth