undone's Stories

Third Grade Dream Horror (WEIRD DREAM CHALLENGE)

2008-09-02T03:10:50Z

There was a huge roller coaster in my dream and a guy was in front of it, selling board games. On the speakers, my name was called and that meant I could get on the ride. As I rode through the roller coaster’s dark environment, I heard that I won A POT OF GOLD ! The pot of gold floated in front of me, but I heard my sister saying, “Noo, don’t take it!” When I got off the ride, I heard people saying that the board game seller was killed and then, I saw a weird man looking at me so I ran into a building. In there, I had to choose between going into a restaurant or those 7/11 stores, but without the donuts, coffee, slurpee machines, and nice Asian ladies. The waiter at the restaurant urged me to get in the restaurant, but he smiled in a really scary way so I went into the 7/11 store. Suddenly, my two best friends at the time appeared. Then, the big cashier guy came up to us with a knife and started to slowly cutting my neck! AND , AND! I woke up.
But when I did, I could still feel the cold metal knife in my neck..

Gone South

2008-06-23T19:51:59Z

No regret,
nothing left.
Maybe it’s my
heart left to blame,
for its gone
south with the rest,
waiting for something
to put it to shame.

She's one of a kind

2008-06-06T22:16:40Z

She’s like Snow White
on the street,
ready to eat.

She’s like Rapunzel
with hair so long
it can’t be beat.

She’s like Cinderella
because there she was,
but now she’s gone.

But she wasn’t real,
she was just a love song.

A wish for another day

2008-05-31T21:13:15Z

Day One

She had black eyes. They were beautiful, if not amazing. They were gleaming in the sunlight, but that was as far as I could see.

Oops, my customer is waiting, better start on his order. He was impatient, tapping his left foot. I wondered whether she’d still be outside the window when I was done. Probably not. She was pretty and was probably waiting for her boyfriend, the rich kind. It was a traffic jam in Wammy’s Coffeepot and we were providing the music with all our grinding, blending, shaking, mixing. The staff of Wammy’s Coffeepot was practically a band that came in 6 days a week, 5 hours a day, and for only $9.50 of hour’s pay. I finished his order with one final stir. As I handed him his hot coffee, I looked and found that she wasn’t there. Figures. Why would she still be there when she could be having fun with someone else, somewhere else.
“Excuse me, can I order now?”
I sighed and then turned in shock. I can’t believe it. She was here and I noticed that her eyes, weren’t black, but brown.

Underneath the cycle

2008-05-31T20:31:35Z

Just point
and blame
and walk in shame.
All ye’ need
has gone to waste.
Nothing left to stare
upon.
Doing things that
you’ve done wrong.
Everyone has gone to
shame,
everyone has done
the same.

Walking alone

2008-05-28T02:45:35Z

I can’t stand the way you walk,
the way you talk.
It don’t matter,
nobody matters.
You certainly don’t care,
about anyone,
but
you,
you,
and
you!

So keep on walking,
blind as a bat,
so keep on talking,
like you don’t care.
‘Cause it don’t matter,
nobody does.

Ready, Get Set, GO!

2008-05-22T00:14:52Z

Watch it.

Watch what you say.

No running now,

So fire away!!!

The motherhood

2008-05-22T00:09:21Z

Ma,
no one ever, ever, ever
said it would be easy
to be you.
Of course you’re tired.
Tired of us!
And sick of us too
‘cause nobody gave
you those baby steps
and told you what
to do,
it just happened,
we happened,
and we happened fast.
But boy,
you wouldn’t take us back
...would you?

Silent

2008-05-04T03:55:05Z

bite your lip
bite your tongue
just shut up
just be quiet
there’s no point anymore,
talking.

One more time

2008-04-26T17:21:31Z

So, one more tissue,
So, one more time,
So, please just let me cry.

Goodnight

2008-04-26T17:20:59Z

No one spoke,
No one said,
About anything,
Before I went to bed.

Other side

2008-04-14T23:33:20Z

Incorporated doom
To the end.
Judged in,
Judged out,
Gave many let downs.

Powder

2008-04-14T23:29:55Z

White powder dust
Captured the free,
Lost their minds
Far beyond the sea.

Lost

2008-04-14T01:35:35Z

In the lost world,
You’re out of the loop,
Out of rhymes,
Out of time.

On the wall

2008-03-14T04:55:03Z

Window, window,
on my wall.
Can you stand, through it all?
Rain or shine.
Hail or snow.
Will you not let the breeze go?