Prelude to extinction

by Gnarforama_X

The raptor woke rapidly as piercing screams rolled through the jungle. He stirred, uncoiling from his shelter, his stomache now aching with hunger and anticipation of someone’s fresh kill.

He raced through the dense foilage, increasing his speed with every shriek.

He stopped, saliva now dribbling down his chin and neck to his heaving chest.

After a brief pause Stripetail burst through the clearing, talons and fangs ready to assure himself a part of the kill.
He stopped, never anticipated what he would see before him.

Two brontos! Bloodied but still appearing to put up a fight against three raptors, smaller and much younger than him.

Stripetail stopped, sensing something wrong.

Then the larger of the brontosaurs shot down his head with his sinewy neck and bludgened the light blue raptor with repeated blows, then lapped out blood and brains from the ruined skull.

Stripetail froze in confusion,they were fleeing the normally gentle brutes!

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Prelude to extinction

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    dinos!!! ahhhhh!

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What a creative approach to this challenge – love the angle & descriptions… Lots of directions this one could go… There are some great images in this. I see that you’ve already followed up with a sequel – nice work. I can’t believe how many people have already entered this challenge. There’s over a month before the deadline. Great work.

  3. Prelude to extinction

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Dinosaurs are scary. great imagery, you seem to know your Dinos’

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