Comet's wish

by Insert Pen Name Here

I saw it flashing through the sky
a thought
a streak
a wonder

“A shooting star!”
“A comet, oh!”
Make a wish, they said
I smiled, a secret
on my mouth
I knew
what they did not

A comet’s purpose
is not to be wished on
But
to wish
on us.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Comet's wish

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Wow. You have skillz.

  2. Comet's wish

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    thats lovely

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