Transformation

by blueyedwonder

Add to AIMShare

As soon as she hit the water, she felt the transformation begin. Her legs joined, her gills protruded, and her hair turned silvery green and grew several inches per second, until it hit the small of her back. She felt her eyes widen and bulge as they adapted themselves for seeing in the water. Her nails also turned silvery green and grew alarmingly fast, until they were deadly sharp and hard as rocks. her ears pointed and her teeth grew into sharp fangs that made her smile look like a grimace. Her charm hung limp until she touched the deep onyx stone in the middle of it. Then it lengthened and slimmed into a gleaming unearthly sword.

She sent out her call, listening intently for any soundsign of Matt. From in the murky seaweed patch, her call came back, shaped by a struggling figure.

Then Laurielle went to find her human.

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Transformation

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I liked the last line…cute.

  2. Transformation

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WOW ! I’m quite sure I won’t die now.

  3. Transformation

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, very interesting prospect. You’re really creative, I applaud you.

  4. Transformation

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Neat. I like the cross between mermaid and sword-toting vampire. It’s an unusual mix.

  5. Transformation

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    What I was going for here is that mermyds aren’t happy and pretty and preppy airheads like arielle from the little mermaid, but they’re…sorta powerful, and dangerous, and they could be evil if they wanted to, but they have enough charisma that they’re not. If that made sense at all.

  6. Transformation

    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the last part and dose mat no she is a mermaid ??

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!