as i discover hope

by Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3

Something inside me rose, i don’t know what it was,
i think about this new feeling, as i ponder on the thought i watch. And wait.
still i watch as around me the world goes on, the clock just ticks away. tick, tick ,tick.
i feel as though i am a great scientist who has just discovered something, something great and extraordinary.
i feel exposed but somewhat alive all at the same time.”what can this be?”, i ask myself. i keep this question in my mind as my life passes me by.
that’s when i realize, i have discovered something great, i have discovered HOPE !

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  1. as i discover hope

    Insert Pen Name Here 's Buddy Icon Insert Pen Name Here

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow, that was really neat. well written, it makes me feel hopeful too!

  2. as i discover hope

    Shadow's Buddy Icon Shadow

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    It’s pretty cool :)

  3. as i discover hope

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    awww, i’ve felt like that too. awesome work

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