Tug (revision)

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Tug, tug
A tug on my skirt
What’s Beauty?
Love?
Happy?
Good?
I smile and explain with good cheer
and great joy
what these things mean in our world.

Another tug… uncertain this time…
What’s Ugly?
Hate?
Sadness?
Bad?
Sighing, I sit, and prepare to tell
that beauty, love, happy, and good,
are not the only thing in our world.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Tug (revision)

    Insert Pen Name Here 's Buddy Icon Insert Pen Name Here

    Posted about 1 year ago

    ok, heres a revision of tug; what do you think?

  2. Tug (revision)

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Coulda just edited the 1st one didn’t need a whole new ficlet. Needs more revison, sorry, last line I think you meant in our world not out. just saying..

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