I was smiling.

by Jayme Meiram

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If only you had noticed me the moment I was smiling.

If only you had talked with me the moment I was smiling.

If only you had walked with me as I left the room smiling.

If only a lot of things had happened maybe I would still be smiling

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. I was smiling.

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i like the repetition.

  2. I was smiling.

    Jayme Meiram's Buddy Icon Jayme Meiram

    Posted 11 months ago

    thank you

  3. I was smiling.

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 11 months ago

    I liked the repetition too…this says a lot.

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