Hairstyles

by Daisy Miller

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“It was just so sudden . . . ” she said, shaking her head in disbelief.

“How did it happen again?”

“It was a car. He was crossing the road, and well . . . .”

“Didn’t he look before he crossed?”

“Yeah, but his hair was in his eyes.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Hairstyles

    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    I am so sorry but I hate the title and this story is foolish to me but other wise I love the rest sorry If I offended you but I have read some of your other work I know you could do better you are a very great author

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree that maybe a different title would be nice, but I really like it. It’s short, but it gets the point across, and it’s pretty powerful. I mean, getting hit because you had hair in your face and couldn’t see…

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    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    wait on second thought if u think about it in a emotinal deep way but not how it is read like if u think of the wool pulled over his eyes or he didnt even have a chance to take action

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    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I disagree. I think this is great. And the title fits. Maybe I am old… old fashioned.. not “hip”... However you care to “label” but I am constantly ruffled by the new hairstyles that cover the eyes, or eye. I definitely see the troubles these “styles” cause and not just tragedies. This is a great piece.

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