He Doesn't Know

by Laine the Grey

Henri waited at the bus stop, his hair blacker than ever in the rain. “Henri?” asked a distinctly female voice. “Oh, Henri, I thought we’d never find you!” Henri’s eyes blurred and he couldn’t focus on the child next to him. “Mum and Dad will be so happy.” She pulled him through the winding streets before coming to a store front. The windows looked as if they hadn’t been washed in ages.
“Mama!” The girl began explaining in rapid French.
“So,” said the man. “You’ve come back to us, Henri.”
“I am sorry.” Henri started slowly. “I do not know what you are talking about. I have never met any of you before. You must have mistaken me for someone else.” He walked out of the door. The child started after him.
“Let him go, Genevieve. He doesn’t know us.”

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  1. He Doesn't Know

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This raises a lot of questions.

  2. He Doesn't Know

    jesithepoet's Buddy Icon jesithepoet

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Indeed it does! Keep it up!

  3. He Doesn't Know

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Hmm, intriguing and bordering on confusing. Is the odd pronoun usage intentional? [‘never met us’ instead of n’ever met you’]

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    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oooohhhooohhhh

    i like it verrryyy verrryyy much

    can i sequel?! i have the best idea!!

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    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    SEQUEL COMPLETED

    read away my feathered friends

    and laine – hope you like.

    I’m more excited to see what you do with mine lol

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ooo, nice ficlet, raises thousands of questions, seeing as i haven’t read the series =]

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