I Let Her Break My Heart{A Lame attempt at poetry/song writing}

by SKermitgorf

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I let her break my heart again.
Like she broke it once before.
I took her back again.
To break my heart some more.

A million more times
Still would not be enough
To keep me from getting
My heart all broken up

I let her break my heart
Like she broke it once before.
She’ll come back again
To break my heart some more.

If I had the chance
I’d do it all again
I’d let her break my heart
Like she did from the start.

I’ll let her back for sure
To break my heart some more

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. I Let Her Break My Heart{A Lame attempt at poetry/song writing}

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    The sentiment is nice, and easily relatable.

  2. I Let Her Break My Heart{A Lame attempt at poetry/song writing}

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    ha better than any of my attempts at poetry. nice job.

  3. I Let Her Break My Heart{A Lame attempt at poetry/song writing}

    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i like it until the second to last stanza and then you changed rhyme schemes. but not bad.

  4. I Let Her Break My Heart{A Lame attempt at poetry/song writing}

    Kiarra's Buddy Icon Kiarra

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it :)

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