An Unreasonable Request

by Elliot Ryan

Her smile was contagious. I couldn’t help but return the brilliant expression ten fold.

As the hot water drowned her teabag, she looked up at me with the bright green eyes that I had loved for so very long.

“Jamie, I need help.” Her voice was honey on buttered toast, the sweetness almost too much to bare as I continued making our drinks.

“With?” I asked. “You know I’d do anything for you.” I removed the cream from the refrigerator and set it in front of her.

She shifted in her chair uncomfortably, “I need to kill someone.”

I dropped the dish holding the sugar, neglecting to watch it meet its fate on the tile floor and stared at her, unbelieving.

“You dropped the sugar.”

“I know, I dropped the sugar.” I snapped back with a hint of frustration. “You want me to what?”

“Kill someone. Someone that I know means a lot to you.” She took the teaspoon and swirled the cream around the fragile porcelain cup.

I shook my head as I took a seat next to her. “Who? Why?”

“Me.”

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  1. An Unreasonable Request

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    what? i want more…prequel, sequel, anything!

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Got me hooked! And I see you’ve interested people enough to write pieces on both sides of your story!

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    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, this was great.

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