Tast-E-Freeze Duplicity

by THX 0477

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“It ain’t right,” Pistol said as he hopped out of the old truck at the Tast-E-Freeze, “You know Sweet’s bout t’ask her out.”
“Now see,” Bubba countered, “We only knows that cuz we read his jur’null. He woulda trusted us, this whole sit-ee-ashun coulda been avoided.” Pistol sighed and followed Bubba to the window.
“Hey Becky,” Pistol said shyly. He could see why Sweet wanted to ask her out; she was cute, freckles and all.
“Hey there, Pistol,” Becky answered with a smile that could charm the stink off a skunk. Pistol blushed, but not Bubba.
“What, now how-de-do for me?”
The smile turned to a smirk, “Hey Bubba. What kin I getchu’ boys?” She made Southern sound good.
“Funny you should ask, darlin’,” came Bubba’s suave rejoinder in his best smooth talking voice, “How’s about this Fri…”
Pistol blurted, “Don’t say yes! He’s only askin’ you cuz he knows Sweet’s gonna ask you tonight at the, um…” But he stopped; he knew that look in Bubba’s eye. If he started running now, he might make it home alive.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Tast-E-Freeze Duplicity

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    charm stink off a skunk. lol, lov the slangy way he tawlks.

  2. Tast-E-Freeze Duplicity

    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    tee hee
    Pistol needs to learn to keep his ol’ mouth shut
    or he gunna get into a LOT more trouble than he worth
    durn crazy fool
    !!

  3. Tast-E-Freeze Duplicity

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Funny, living in Indiana I know several people named Bubba. Strangely, this character reminds me of all of them…. : )

  4. Tast-E-Freeze Duplicity

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    She made Southern sound good.
    Excellent description.
    ~
    Still laughing at Yoda’s comment.

  5. Tast-E-Freeze Duplicity

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haahaahaa. nice series.

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